i know the grammar isnt too good
but other suggestions?
I have my mothers spine
stack the blocks up
insert head on top
The notches indicating
how far ive come-
instead of creating a lie to attach to it
Allowing the mistakes
to crawl inbetween the spaces
and let them nest there
dormant
but remember their existence
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2 comments:
i love the line "stack the blocks up insert head on top" - wonderful :) ... i like this whole piece all around.
You write very well.
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