Thursday, February 7, 2008

Chicka chicka rough draft

i know the grammar isnt too good
but other suggestions?

I have my mothers spine
stack the blocks up
insert head on top
The notches indicating
how far ive come-
instead of creating a lie to attach to it
Allowing the mistakes
to crawl inbetween the spaces
and let them nest there
dormant
but remember their existence

2 comments:

sunnyskys987 said...

i love the line "stack the blocks up insert head on top" - wonderful :) ... i like this whole piece all around.

Anonymous said...

You write very well.